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What do you think?
Yoyo A toddler has a miniature world in his hands, just as God sustains the earth. He frees the cylindrical part Wood and grabs the thread from fraying. Up and down. The chain is thin. And suddenly breaks. The yoyo collapses along with the joy of the young man had. And after the yoyo, a tear falls in, splintered shiny surface of toys destroyed. I wrote this poem in about 5 minutes. Tell me what you think.
I think it is BEAUTIFUL! me love writing and that was only significant and ran very well! great job!
Bangkok university cheerleading 2007 ( yoyo land)